Im not stopping

This was an awful poem. How can you say this. Go rot in a hole with ur toenail clippers. Cutting urself is not the right way to go actually its the tunnel of death. Ok. well thats what i feel and i hope you like.
~Snug~

It's a good poem, very emotional. I like the ending :) Flow was smooth, well done.

'Ive' been doing this for awhile
It should be (I've)

Just a suggestion to put more punctuations in your poem =)

I love it but cuttin your self isnt helpin you sweetie. its only makin it worse because the scars are gonna make you think about everything and every time u cut yourself and how it was somethin new and then one day all of it is gonna be to much. the cuttin is just a way for you to escape the emotional pain ur goin through to another place where the physical pain kicks in but stay strong

To tell you the truth, I like this poems and everything but I know from experience that cutting is not the solution. I have cause all my friends to hurt because they knew I cut myself. When I started cutting more they decided to flee. I don't want you to get that far. So go right ahead cut yourself if you want to lose your friends and if you want to hurt everyone that loves you.

Luv it!relation to it!!!5/5 all the way