Really fluent and well penned, its emphatic because of its length!

Go ahead, cut urself. ruin the one chance you'll have to have a happy life. think of anyone who loves you and the pain u cause them if they found out u cut urself.

I really like this one.
like, the way it flows, too.
lol. im not too good with words :P

Its different which makes it interesting =] i like it it has a lovely flow to it which makes it a good read =]

NIcely written and flowing well, The ending is great and I liked the way you wrote it. 5/5 all the way

Luv it!relation to it!!!5/5 all the way

To tell you the truth, I like this poems and everything but I know from experience that cutting is not the solution. I have cause all my friends to hurt because they knew I cut myself. When I started cutting more they decided to flee. I don't want you to get that far. So go right ahead cut yourself if you want to lose your friends and if you want to hurt everyone that loves you.

I love it but cuttin your self isnt helpin you sweetie. its only makin it worse because the scars are gonna make you think about everything and every time u cut yourself and how it was somethin new and then one day all of it is gonna be to much. the cuttin is just a way for you to escape the emotional pain ur goin through to another place where the physical pain kicks in but stay strong

It's a good poem, very emotional. I like the ending :) Flow was smooth, well done.

'Ive' been doing this for awhile
It should be (I've)

Just a suggestion to put more punctuations in your poem =)

This was an awful poem. How can you say this. Go rot in a hole with ur toenail clippers. Cutting urself is not the right way to go actually its the tunnel of death. Ok. well thats what i feel and i hope you like.
~Snug~