Haha, i loved how this poem started out really sweet and than it had revenge at the end. it was really good.

Beautiful poem! i love it, i love how you wrote it nd everythin! n thnx for commentin mine 2..
x.Dani.x

Loved it .. just love it .. tho it was damn senti n all but.. still a great piece of work.. great flow .. brilliant work

keep it up

~Wake~