This is very emotional, and has lots of great lines, for instance the line about tears sinking in... that was great. it's a bit tough to get through, there's quite a lot to read, but i know it's difficult to take out parts in such a heartfelt piece. perhaps breaking it up a little more would help the reader finish, and going through and making more lines poetic in a sense. adding a few more adjectives, and sensory snippets. over all though it's really good.

Very sad and heartfelt piece.
Keep writing
Take Care Cindy

Wow!!! gr8 poem!!!
5/5
this is so... sad and nice!!!
i love it, really!!
keep up the good work!!!