This poem is so sad and touchy... very heartfelt nearly brought tears to my eyes.. you are so talented and this poem shows that talent... Great poem!

This is such a really heartfelt poem...i enjoyed reading it....and the ending was amazing. really great write.

Wow, again, the power behind this was amazing. this definitely evokes thought and emotions.

Pair, why did you have to leave me so?
I thought that it was always going to be us
We were so safe with each other
You were the who I could trust

by far my favorite line. you've written an amazing piece, and even though it's a bit long, i love it.

This piece is truly sad. It is very touching and honest... Atmosphere of this poem is great but I don't like the way you wrote poem. Still you wrote this one straight from the heart and that deserves 5/5