Hey that was a very nice poem. It is truly heartfelt and you poured out your emotions onto this piece. Very good choice of words. You had me hanging on to every word. Great job!
Take care always
Kristina

wow, that was a great poem, very sweet and romantic! it was nicely written and flowed very well! keep up the good work, youre an awesome poet!

I love you're work! Such a beautiful poem! It flowed nicely! I JUST LOVE IT! You sound like such a sweet guy and you also seem so sorry for what happened. I know that can never understand the things between you and "her" but you really show you care towards her. I hope she realizes how much you care.

Oh my gosh! This is such a sweet poem. That's horrible that you lost the one you cared so much about. Hopefully you find another. Once again, outstanding writing!!!! ~dandy~

lol wooow this had a really cool ending to it, you're a really talented writer and im gona hav to check out some more of your work now, well done!:)beanxx