You were there

by luv Shelbz luv   Jul 10, 2007


In light and dark
In fear and gloom
In times of bad marks
You were there even in doom

In happiness or storms
In troubled waters
In times of mourn
You were there like my father

In good times and bad
In starting a new start
In all the times we've had
You were there with your good heart

In times I thought
That it was the end
In times we faught
You were there my very best friend

*dedicated to my bff Kathy

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  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Its a really good poem.
    I can relate..
    and the fact that its dedicated to someone makes it seem even more wholesome to me.
    I loved it.
    keep it up.
    xoxo
    --Chelsey

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Can relate, have a very close friend who is always there.
    so yeah, i liked this one, it was sweet and very cute.
    well done
    love Tara-Kay
    xxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Angela

    Awww such a cute poem for a friend.. she is very lucky :)
    a the poem is awesomly written

  • 17 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    Very sweet poem about friendship.. cherish it. i rated this a 5

  • 17 years ago

    by StephanieH

    The person above me is right, the flow is perfect in the last stanza!! GREAT JOB keep up the good work check out some of my poems, thanx

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