5/5 because it was really sweet. ^_^ ty! |
by Fan Angeleo
I love every word , great work. |
by David
This was excellent, the ending stanza was so funny and full of happiness. your skill has greatly inproved to an uncanny level, well done. |
by Jemma
Wow, nice and cheery and wow... a birthday poem! Love it... |
by unknown
Nice rythm.. Nice flow.. Nicely done. |
by Debbie
This gave me a smile. =] |
by Veamm
Nice and cute.. |
by Twobit
A birthday one! Marvelous and I appreciate the comment! 5/5 |
Sweet poem |
by nikki
I wish i felt like that on my birthday. i loved it, the way you expressed it was great. 5/5 |
Awww |
Cute poem ^^ |
by gack60
Again another good piece, nice and smooth all the way through. |
Wow, i can really relate to the feelin you speak of in this verse: |
by Sarah
Awww, so sweet poem!! I loved it, birthday poems are most that I read, very cute. |