by brianna Jul 10, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
A little girl lies |
by Kaila
Very amazing brianna I loved it |
by Corruption
This is a great poem good job thx for the comment |
by Mr M
The best part of this was the way you captured the innocense of this child in the last line of each stanza and continued to return your readers to that. |
Wow, that was a very strong poem with strong emotion. Very well done, it gets my vote, for sure. :( it's sad, though. |
by Tim Mauntler
Love the poem... wow, is it getting that bad over there? i know what it's like to have your parents go through a divorce.... and wait, were u drunk when u left that comment? lol, i was in s carolina visiting my dad |