OMG, this is amazing. I love it. I have never heard anyone explain it like this, the details were magnificent

"Her golden sunshine hair, is now in peaces on the floor
He yanks her around, even as she screams "no more"
He gets off on her pain, seeing the tears fill her eyes
Another night of black and blue, another midnight lie."

favorite part^^

But i thought the ending was great
it tied everything together just perfect, 5/5