Comatose Me. [[Sestina]]

by Teria   Jul 11, 2007


Comatose Me [[Sestina]]

The river like a dream,
peaceful and easy.
The mud like a fantasy,
so immortal and delicious.
The grass like a blanket,
surrendering my heart.

Surrendering, surrendering my heart,
lost within a dream,
never to come true, saved by a blanket.
Of which was in my dream,
for the tenderness so delicious,
so peaceful and easy.

My fantasy, oh fantasy,
melting with your heart,
mine with yours, oh how delicious.
You're my life, you're my dream,
you're peaceful and easy.
Baby, in the cold you're my blanket.

My blanket, oh, oh my blanket..
My fantasy, oh, oh my fantasy.
So, peaceful and easy,
surrendering my heart.
The river like a dream,
so immortal and delicious.

My life is showering away, the feeling so delicious.
Just as petals from a flowerbed of blankets.
Just as you and I within my dream,
within each fantasy.
Baby, both hearts; mine and your heart..
Connecting, connecting way too easy.

Connecting, connecting way too easy,
you know the feeling, so delicious.
Yours and mine, oh each heart..
Filling with such joy, covered by a blanket,
never to be seen, no never to be seen, only in our fantasy.
And, this rivers like a dream..

Easy, take it easy baby and comatose me within this blanket,
Such delicious memories, within each fantasy,
Heart, baby your heart it's pulling way too hard, only in my dream.

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This is my first sestina; I don't think it's good.. at all.
Lol. :/
Maybe next time.

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  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Greatly written love poem, and it's not bad sestina at all. I loved every stanza, and the choice of words is the whole piece is excellent.
    You're great poet, very talented.
    5/5 from me