I luv ur creativity! i enjoyed reading this poem! it had a great flow!

Love this poem very cool i felt really good after reading it .great flow and very creative i love it.

Wow this poem is eye catching so great work

Wow, I love this piece from the beginning to the end. It has great wording and so vivid imagery. Every stanza is excellently written. Jim Morrison's work inspired some of mine poems, too.
I like the ending of the poem.
Well done, 5.5 from me, but you deserve more for this one.
Keep writing

Thats really wonderful and good writing... enjoyed the reading with pleasure. Keep up your nice work... 5/5