Awwwww cuzin dat touched me hella much

I like this one
xx

Hunny, I 'm feeling the hurt you're expressing.. Again, please don't take offence, but some spelling needs correcting.. the poem itself, though, is really good. Well done. xx

I know how u feel and i still dont know how come we feel all that

This poem could have been a lot better if your grammar had been checked first. Print this out and take it to an english teacher at your school. Have him/her read over it and correct it for you. Otherwise, I love your poem. It just needs some grammar and spelling corrections. 3/5

Really well. The questions were really touching. Very well. 5/5

Lol i wonda y 2.its crazy.but hopefully we would get ova it n find sum1 betta...al tho rite now it might seem impossible.cuz in our eyes he was always da perfect 1...our dream cum thru

Ty