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by brielle Jul 11, 2007 category : Love, romance / desired love
We created the mistake Nothing more, nothing less Only emotional turmoil Is explanation at best Our actions came swift Exceeding needed words Now look where its left us Minds perfectly burned The pull of our impulses Threw logistics away Yet simplistic desire Poached feelings to stay Beings now deserted Of emotional strength Look where its left us With just the mistake
by Oceansoul
Very well written,very good flow very clear in what you wanted to say very well done keep it up :)