The Mistake

by brielle   Jul 11, 2007


We created the mistake
Nothing more, nothing less
Only emotional turmoil
Is explanation at best

Our actions came swift
Exceeding needed words
Now look where its left us
Minds perfectly burned

The pull of our impulses
Threw logistics away
Yet simplistic desire
Poached feelings to stay

Beings now deserted
Of emotional strength
Look where its left us
With just the mistake

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  • 17 years ago

    by Oceansoul

    Very well written,very good flow
    very clear in what you wanted to say
    very well done
    keep it up :)