Woah. That flowed so well I had no moments where I stopped reading it. That has never ONCE happened to me. I am in awe. This is an amazing song. I'm trying to find a place that I can help fix but all I can seem to find is that you just have some grammar issues, but they're easily missed, sorry this is all I can do:

"A shrug thats so quick"

"thats" should be "that's"

And thats about it. Wow.