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by Poetess Lana   Jul 11, 2007


Just another lonely soul,
I hide from humanity.
Anger drips from my veins,
and i wonder how much more
of your bullshit I can take.

I tried to get close, you pushed me away,
and you tried to control me.
I can't do this, I can't do that, you pushed
me over the edge and wondered why
I hate you.

You try to hurt me with dagger sharp words,
forcing them into my skin,
but words can only hurt me so much,
and I can strike back twice as hard.

Why did you start it?
Why did you tell the lies?
Did you want me all to yourself?
Was I your disguise?

Did I hide you from the world?
Were you too afraid to show the person within?
Bad news, love, there wasn't much to hide.
And you forced me to realize I don't need you,
and now that you're without me, you are all alone.

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  • 16 years ago

    by linderrrxo

    Very nice! i really liked it =) love linda

  • 16 years ago

    by Krystal

    This is good, the last lines gave me goosebumps.
    And the rest of the poem led up to it so well.
    Good job, amazing job, keep it up.
    -Krystal

  • 16 years ago

    by Chaosti Titian

    Great poem, but my computer won't let me vote on it. just know that i give you a 5/5. for titles, how about Think Again?

  • 17 years ago

    by Alicia Jane

    This is relaly good,
    i hate girls who always use you.. and treat u like dirt but hay they get what is coming too them :]
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I thought this poem was excellent and the words were very true. 5/5 from me - how about Hiding from humanity as a title?? GG23

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