Comments : I Hold You In My Dreams

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Beautiful yet well expressive emotions write...so breathtaking... "Be true to yourself first and foremost. The only important thing in life is what you do with the time you spend here on earth. Don't be afraid to follow your desires, they are not silly nor selfish. Take the time and do what makes you feel alive. Leave your fears and regrets in the past, for this is where they belong. Don't cloud today with things that can't be undone. You have no more control over yesterday or Tomorrow, than you do the raging of your passions. Do not quiet these dreams nor quench your desires. For if you do, your journey is ended. You have only today to begin anew and follow your dreams. For in the end all we have are our memories. When the twilight comes to us, let there be, No excuses, no explanations, no regrets!

    Have a good day! keep them coming, keep your smiling whatever it may comes, take care, Bert.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Jeannie
    This is a beautiful piece you have penned. The picture you have painted with your words is breathtaking.

    Still lingering, I face the starlit night
    To look upon the moon that glows so bright
    With tattered tears I watch the shimmer beams
    Then slowly lay upon the bed
    And hold you in my dreams

    This stanza is so awesome. It is a perfect ending. Just draws you right into your dream.
    ~CLAP~CLAP~CLAP~
    Love Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    'Still lingering, I face the starlit night
    To look upon the moon that glows so bright
    With tattered tears I watch the shimmer beams
    Then slowly lay upon the bed
    And hold you in my dreams.'

    Beautiful!! How the simplicity of your words, and the wonderful flow of your stanzas, make the reading of your work so incredibly disruptive to my tear-ducts!! :-) Well done, yet again. xx

  • 17 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    'Still lingering, I face the starlit night
    To look upon the moon that glows so bright
    With tattered tears I watch the shimmer beams
    Then slowly lay upon the bed
    And hold you in my dreams.'

    Beautiful!! How the simplicity of your words, and the wonderful flow of your stanzas, make the reading of your work so incredibly disruptive to my tear-ducts!! :-) Well done, yet again. xx