Haha, i love it. very cute and sweet. the rhyming is simple and flows great. this is an awesome write.

Aww this is a beautiful poem!!!
i love it!!! is so nice!!!
keep it up!!!
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I like =]! Even though it's kind of short =P I think there's always a fear of somebody that you love, leaving you. You really explain that feeling here. =)
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