Sweetest Sin (Triolet)

by Jenni Marie   Jul 11, 2007


Come and take me, let me be your sweetest sin
Let's find our way to the greatest pleasure
Let me please you, cater to your every whim
Come and take me, let me be your sweetest sin
Daring you to take me fully from within
Come and unearth this beautiful treasure
Come and take me, let me be your sweetest sin
Let's find our way to the greatest pleasure

Triolet-Consists of 8 lines.
The 1st, 4th and 7th repeat.
The 2nd and 8th repeat as well.
The rhyme scheme is abaaabab

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  • 17 years ago

    by Krazy

    Nice, very nice. i like it a lot, it's got just enough rhyming to keep it going. word choice was a bit lacking but that didn't take away from the overall feeling. so great job (:

  • 17 years ago

    by Hebe

    Great poem.
    I really enjoyed reading it.
    Well done.

  • 17 years ago

    by Phil

    Wow beautiful piece of writing, keep it up
    Phil

  • 17 years ago

    by lisa

    Beautiful huni!!great use of words.absolutely beautiful 5/5/5/5/5/5

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