Comments : You're The First, My Last, My Everything (Triolet)

  • 17 years ago

    by lisa

    AWWWWWWWWW thats so beautiful and sad at the same time.i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!that was so nice to read.it warmed me inside ,well done huni.5/5 keep it up xlisax

  • 17 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    Aww! i love it! such a beautiful poem! great work.. 5/5
    x.Dani.x

  • 17 years ago

    by Phil

    What a beautiful poem, even though it's sad it's so true 5/5
    Phil

  • 17 years ago

    by Hebe

    Beautiful poem.
    Reading it makes me warm inside.
    Great piece of writing.
    Take care