READY FOR LOVE???

by WiNgS Of StEeL   Jul 11, 2007


I am ready for love,
all the joy and the pain.
plus all the time that it takes
so that i may stay in your good grace.

id quickly give up my freedom,
to be held in your captivity.
but you always said
"be careful what you ask for..cuz you might receive"
but if you asked me tomorrow,
id say exactly the same thing.

because i am ready for love,
all of the joy and the pain that it may bring.
though I'm happy with this sweet melody that you sing.

would you please lend me your ears,
i promise that i will never complain
all that i need is for you to acknowledge i am here.

because i am ready for love...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Andy

    Brilliant poem :)
    with a great opening into the poem!

    "I am ready for love,
    all the joy and the pain."

    followed by a truely memorable ending :)

    "because i am ready for love.."

    5/5 again :)!

  • 16 years ago

    by robbie

    Iv been ready for love for to long now:)
    just cant wait to faal again
    nice

  • 17 years ago

    by Ingrid

    It feels like you were very much in love when you wrote this poem! I loved it!

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 17 years ago

    by Kat

    "because i am ready for love..."

    So true of how I feel right now. I want someone to love. I miss that. You really captured that feeling well. I am blown away by the more of your poems that I read! 5/5 :)

    ~Kat~

  • 17 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    A good poem, a little choppy. Maybe just needs some work. I guess maybe I just don't like it so much as I loved your other ones. Can't say why. Don't mean to say anything that might hurt, I'm just a bit blunt I guess.

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