That was truly inspiring. It really hit me deep. it has such resemblance to my life, it's so...weird. thank you, it was wonderful. bravo! 5/5

I envy your talent. You're amazing! This poem was so sad and yet so deep. Your point was made perfectly, without too much fluff. Great job!

~Mo~

I gave it a four. Only because the rhyming was a little inconsistant. Other than that it was great and everyone has thier little inconsistancies. And if you get good enough you can have those and still get fives. Most people do that anyways but I'm strict. Wolfs are my favorite animals so it caught my eyes. ^_^

The rhyming could have been better, otherwise but it was a great poem. the way you express your words is superb
5/5
my fave lines
My life is broken,
Into small pieces
When I see the end,
I'll know this will cease.

Wow. You are so talented. Another amazing poem of yous, flaw is incredible.
Where I am my enemy,
and I am my friend
I fight myself
to the bitter end,
^this stanza is perfect. I am really impressed. Great piece!