Comments : Lies

  • 17 years ago

    by Lets Keep it A Surprise

    Mm i'd say 5/5, it was still a pretty good poem. The flow blended into the poem quite well, but the vocabulary could be improved.
    All in all good poem :)

    Quillx

  • 17 years ago

    by Steve Powers

    Good little poem! I wrote a poem about cheating too....check it out and let me know what you think...

  • 17 years ago

    by XfromwithinX

    Even if it was written quikly i fink its really good.
    well done xx

  • 17 years ago

    by kelsey

    Thats very good concidering it was a quick one. nice work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Mandy

    Awww. thats sad. but i like it. 5/5

    comment my new poems plz! thx!