I was sadly mistken

by tamara   Jul 11, 2007


I thought you were my best friend
i thought you'd always care
but i was sadly mistaken
and because of you i found out how life is so unfair

the second i left
you found her
and once you did i didn't matter
because she was cuter

then i came back to see you
and i thought you'd hug me and never let go
but once again i was sadly mistaken
you didn't even say hello

i know you new i was there
you looked right into my eyes
but then you just continued walking
so you didn't even hear my cries

later i saw you with her
mucking about and having fun
not a though of me in your mind
not a thought of how my life was coming undone

you were the most important person to me
and now your gone
so i have no one left
and am becoming very withdrawn

there is just one last thing i need you to know
I HATE YOU
and more than I've ever hated anyone before
and believe it because its true

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  • 16 years ago

    by kati

    This is very emotional...i love how everything went together...im sorry that this happend to you..keep writing... 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Bree

    I love how you have put so much emotion into this poem, keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Ixora

    Hm yea i really like this poem very strong with emotion and im sorry if this happened to you :/.

    thanks for the comment btw'

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sad But True

    I thought you were my best friend
    i thought you'd always care
    but i was sadly mistaken
    and because of you i found out how life is so unfair

    This stanza says so alot about life, this is a great poem angel. Hope our hate never consumes us, I know that feeling so well.
    I like the way you released your emotions and feelings in this poem. Really well done.
    You Friend ~SBT~