Tired of it.

by LovexMe   Jul 11, 2007


Always left out,
never left in.
always on the outside,
never let it.
tired of being left out.
tired of always wanting in.
tired of being on the outside,
trying to get in.

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  • 17 years ago

    by sarenightmarexx

    I really like this one. ur really good.

  • 17 years ago

    by Si sI

    I really like this poem... the use of words is pretty good.. nice job hun!! ;)

  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Just to let you know, I forgot to vote, so I came back to do so...5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Hey. "Cliche" means overused, unoriginal, samey etc. It's a word you should really get used to in the poetry world. I've seen your age so I won't be harsh like I normally am. You show some good potential. You know how you put your thoughts and emotions into a form that is readable and interesting to the reader. Whatsmore, many will be able to relate to it. I will say on the first line you have a typo, so you may want to correct that. Keep writing and keep improving.

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