Hey. "Cliche" means overused, unoriginal, samey etc. It's a word you should really get used to in the poetry world. I've seen your age so I won't be harsh like I normally am. You show some good potential. You know how you put your thoughts and emotions into a form that is readable and interesting to the reader. Whatsmore, many will be able to relate to it. I will say on the first line you have a typo, so you may want to correct that. Keep writing and keep improving.

Just to let you know, I forgot to vote, so I came back to do so...5/5

I really like this poem... the use of words is pretty good.. nice job hun!! ;)

I really like this one. ur really good.