Comments : Fake smiles, now dead

  • 17 years ago

    by sheila

    Thats sad great poem i really like it 5/5 keep on writing

  • 17 years ago

    by Becca

    Wow that was really good. So different, I've never read a poem like that. I loved it. Great job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Leanette

    It's a good poem but wow it sad that this stuff really happens to people!!! Sad but good 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    Omg..thsi is such an emotiona and raw poem....and its so powerfull....i know how yu feel as i had my innocence taken away from me aswell wen i was 7 years old!....and it happend last yr aswel...but im glad i got to tlk about it now..
    gr8 poem
    keep it up
    bree

  • 17 years ago

    by DryMyTears

    Very good poem. part two is even better though. keep up the perfect work