God, your poems never disappoint do they???

this was soooooooo original, i just don't know where you get your ideas. i don't usually like a structure with set rhymes but yours seemed so effortless i had to check it was consistent.

i loved the unique way you managed to portray drug abuse. i also loved the reference to jonah and the whale- i love poems that incorporate other stories.
well done
xx

Ohohohoh. Last stanza was AMAAZZZZINNNG. :]
I absolutely loved it.
And, the ENTIRE poem, of course.
Amazing work, dear.
Amazing, amazing, amazing,

It's wonderful.
never don't do this kind of work.
because, ... well, it wouldn't be this good.
Lol. :|

Wonderful job.
5/5

Wow, sheena. i love your wording. it gives it uniqueness and personality. this is a major 5/5.

Oops. crazygonut!!!!

I think this is one of my favorites. It is just very intriguing and written immensley(spelling) well.Also, I love the title it made me giggle a little. 5/5

Brittany

Your poems really reflect the grief within your soul and the poetic power in your pen. So easily you describe your feelings. This is another superb poem I really loved the heading and I made me to read it with all my heart. 5/5 for sure

Tc With love
Fsams