by ABake Jul 11, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
Our bodies move to the rhythm, your hands on my hips. |
by Brittany
I definitely could see EVERYTHING you described. The image was very clear. I got a very intense feeling from this one. It literally blew me away. |
That was a great poem...i loved the way you paint the picture out for me...your a great writter...keep it up. |
by Viola
Let me just start by saying that the title captivated me. Wow! |
Wow! Chills. I have CHILLS! I have never expierienced a dance with anyone but if I did, this is exactly how I would want it. WONDERFUL!! Makes me want to cry! |
by Sydney
Whoot. Anyone else hot?? lol jk. Ha that was good though. Descriptions were awesome and the ending penned it together nicely. Great job : ) |