by Anthony Jul 11, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
It's not worth living for the lies |
by Nix
This poem has amazing atmosphere and you wrote it greatly. Short but still very powerful! Ending is very effective. I like it very much, it really deserves 5/5 |
by Gasttlee
I actually feel you in because I go through this! 5/5 |
I like this piece: It is short but very meaningful. I can relate to it, it sounds similar to some poems I wrote. The greatest power of this piece is in its simplicity and the honesty that you put into words. |
by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx
No more lies!!!!!!!*lol*I really like this poem.It was short but to the point.5/5^-^ |
by Jenni Marie
I thought this was beautifully written and yet heartbreaking at the same time...you managed to pack a lot of emotion and depth into a relatively short piece...well done. |