Wow! You use an incredible amount of imagery in this poem! 5/5

Omg. id love that book. you gotta write a story based on this. have the epilogue either be the poem, or describing the fire and stuuff, and then his new adventures. man travie, youve got a great imagination!!!! now go write me the story!!!!!!

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much love. =]

5/5.