I like the idea of the fire being like the end to end all. Its so symbolic.

Although it could have been better I think. But as your profile says ikt means something to you so thats what matters.

4.5

I really missed reading your poetry. I like this one a lot. It has a haunting vibe to it and it makes me feel cold indide. 5/5

Ravyn

Ooooh intense. i like it, i like it a lot. very very very neat, Daniel Nathaniel. (xoxo) love ya long time sweet cheeks