This is a wonderful read that allows the reader to picture the events that took place in the relationship that you had. When someone touches your heart in the way this person has you will never forget that. May your heart once again feel the peace and joy that you seek once again soon.

sadaddy

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=[ this poem makes me miss my gf more but very gewd btw =] lol

Wowza....
i reali lyk it...
its amazing use of writing..
touched my heart.
n well if its tru what u ryt..
im going thru the same.
nice work!

I love this poem i can totally relate with my X

GOOD JOB

XoXo
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I love this poem i can totally relate with my X

GOOD JOB

XoXo
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I love this poem i can totally relate with my X

GOOD JOB

XoXo
k

I really like this poem. It explains a lot of the feelings some people have when their relationship is over with someone especially when you dont want it to be. It really explains how you only have the memories left of that relationship. Thats the hardest part having only the memories and not the real thing. I hope things work out for you.

"Me and Him
Together we was
As one we became"

I just never understand how women are the only ones who get this concept. A well written piece.

AWW.. SO GOOD!!! LOVE THE LONG POEMS!! LOL.BUT YOUR A GREAT WRITER!! I LIKE THE PART ABOUT I CANT HELP THE WAY I FEEL..I AM IN THE BOAT B/C I CANT HELP IT!!

Aww i like this poem its touching it made me cry lol but its all good :)
i like how you listed the things you remembered and the things you guys use to do it reminds me alot of my bf
anyways nice poem youre a good writer
pc

This is a poem i can relate too!!i love the choice of words and the form of your poems .i loved this one it was brilliant x5/5

Very nice...
I liked how you went back to all of those joyful memories...nice work
5/5

This poem is so good. well done
i can really relate to it aswell (:

Very sad. but i love it.

I liked this poem so...u r so romantic and i can feel your emotions spreading all over every single word...when i put the pieces of images 2gther,i figured out the whole picture that any gurl holding on memories has...yea..HURTFUL BUT SWEET:)

I thought this poem is really great,i could just relate to this poem,i really like it that i put your poem in to my favorite's.