Forever ends to soon

by Si sI   Jul 12, 2007


You said forever
how could you lie
you broke my heart
i felt like i was going to die
now you love her
and i still love you
i just don't get it
please tell me why
tell me what i did wrong
i just want to know
what i did to you
that made me deserve this
because i loved you so much
and you said you did to
you said forever
how could you lie?
... forever ends to soon

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  • 17 years ago

    by CEE CEE

    That is soooooo true FOREVER ENDS TOO SOON!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Ixora

    I thought this one had a bit of a rocky start but it was great otherwise. i really love the ending sentence, probably because its so true and im sure many people would agree with you on that one. Beautiful poem though i vote 5/5 ^_^

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  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Si, this is a nice poem and it flows well. There is a minute mistake, thats u have to use too, not to in the heading as well as the last line. Other than its great. Keep writing

  • 17 years ago

    by kelsey

    Awsome!!

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