Your last and final words

by makenzie   Jul 12, 2007


My heart started pounding when i heard your last words
so dazed in what just acquired
you lying in my arms,i was so afraid and alarmed
and had tried to hold back my tears
though this was my most horrible fear
you not alive to tell you i loved or missed you
or to tell of what i felt was true
and now that your gone i feel so alone and feel i cant go on with out you

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  • Good job like this shows that you really do care even though they are good good job 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Tim Mauntler

    Hey kenzie
    who is this about?
    i like it, but it drags on a little with the words
    but u did use the right words
    i was surprised when i read this one
    4/5 from me

  • 17 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    Wow! i really like this poem i can really relate!