Desired Emotions

by Romancing the Darker Side   Jul 12, 2007


Destined to feel anything
Entwined in a land of nothing;
Swirling feeling all around me, but
In my soul they are nonexistent.
Reaching for anything to fuel
Empty hearts and open minds, I have
Desired thought and thinking.

Embalmed in the emptiness,
Motions crash before my eyes.
Outrageous crying happens upon these
Tear-stained cheeks.
In another world,
Ominous anger and pain exists, but it's
Never here, in my mind.
Still I feel nothing.

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Yes, it's acrostic!

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Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by x0XBloodyFantasyX0x

    Great!

  • 17 years ago

    by Lisa

    Beautiful words
    structure needs work.

  • 17 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Good write nicely worded. structure was shaky though. 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Auspicious76

    Outrageous crying happens upon
    Tear-stained cheeks

    Outrageous crying happens
    upon Tear-stained cheeks

    Great poem... very descriptive. Though sad, I enjoyed reading it.

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