Comments : Desired Emotions

  • 17 years ago

    by Auspicious76

    Outrageous crying happens upon
    Tear-stained cheeks

    Outrageous crying happens
    upon Tear-stained cheeks

    Great poem... very descriptive. Though sad, I enjoyed reading it.

  • 17 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Good write nicely worded. structure was shaky though. 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Lisa

    Beautiful words
    structure needs work.

  • 16 years ago

    by x0XBloodyFantasyX0x

    Great!