Day That She Dies (Sedoka)

by Mommy And Me   Jul 12, 2007


Day That She Dies (Sedoka)

Walking down the street;
She turns into an alley,
And freezes in pure horror.

Waiting Silently
He points the gun towards her;
And whispers to her... 'You're dead.'

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The Sedoka is an unrhymed poem made up of two three-line katauta with the following
syllable counts: 5/7/7, 5/7/7. A Sedoka, pair of katauta as a single poem, may address the
same subject from differing perspectives.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I thought this was amazing, of course that is the reason i chose it as number one in my contest, but it was short

    and the idea about it
    is simple and i loved it

    the bluntness of ir, 5/5 well deserved

  • 17 years ago

    by Beautifully Shattered

    Wow.