How lovely, indeed. I truly find this piece quite delightful to read; in fact, the childlike essence of it endears me exceedingly. Simple, yet enchanting descriptions to say the least. I myself am quite fond of such delicacies in nature, which also includes watching the clouds and so-ons and so-ons; so I thoroughly can connect with this piece. Nice one. :] Thanks for sharing. 5.0

Best wishes,
Marian

Imagery is great and you created wonderful atmosphere. Second stanza is my favorite. Very interesting poem, you wrote this one excellently.
Well done! 5/5