That was good keep up the good work

This is really incredible, so descriptive and heartfelt.. really amazing... you have such a talent! keep writing! let me know when more come out, love to read them!

Stanza #3, line 2 "do nor" should be "does not"
stanza #4, line 1 "were" should be "was"
good story line just work on your editing step with this piece.