Incomplete without you (Part II)

by Fsams   Jul 12, 2007


I kept asking you what is wrong
And every time you said "nothing"
Honey why can't we live strong
You are hiding, there is something

The thing that hurts me most
Is that you left me on the day
We confessed we love each other
And promised to keep tears away

I lay on bed, thinking about you
Trying to recall what have I done
That you wanted me to go away
Forget you and change my way

You shouldn't have kept me in darkness
Help me, take me from this loneliness
I am so lonely without you honey
Tell me the reason, let it be any

My life is incomplete without you
Help me, tell me what should I do
I have a lot to say but if only
You would look & listen to me

Instead you keep telling me
"Forget me, find someone else"
You tell me, how could that be
And how can I love someone else

(To be continued)

Written by Fsams
12/07/2007
Thursday 12:15

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jiyaa

    Instead you keep telling me
    "Forget me, find someone else"
    You tell me, how could that be
    And how can I love someone else

    Wow what a superb ending!
    I am definitly gonna read the next part!
    LOved it

  • 17 years ago

    by Vincent Thornsberry

    The continueation of the first fit together flawlessly. Great job. i love the way this is written. it also has a wonderful rythm. 7/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Annissha

    5/5 awww thiz waz so sad juzt like the firzt part...i almost cried man thiz waz my favorite stanza of them all
    and this stanza

    Instead you keep telling me
    "Forget me, find someone else"
    You tell me, how could that be
    And how can I love someone else

    man that really touched me so much...and it flowed so beautifully...keep doing what u do cuz u do it oh so well..man u so brilliant

    much luv
    peachez

  • 17 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Its a really sad poem and it really touched me. Can't wait to read part 3. Great job. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by NearlyCrazy6

    Wow. i can relate to this poem. I so sorry! great poem i again love the emotion!

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