by firexdancer Jul 12, 2007
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
A mirror made of ripples |
by Crystal Gaze
Superbly Penned. |
by Nix
First stanza is very powerful! Third stanza is beautifully written. Rhyming is great and very original. Last stanza is incredibly good. Topic is excellent, message too. 5/5 |
by nikki
Wow. i loved it, it was beautifully written, i thought it was amazing. the words you use creates such a strong picture in my mind. great work 5/5 |
by Michelle18
Another excellent poem..i really like the rhyming in this one..i added this to my favorites..great job!5/5 |
I loved how you compaired new life to fresh death in the fourth stanza. This poem was flawless. perfect 5/5 babe! ^_^ |