This is really true, i like how you used the first stanza also as the last, the flow was pretty good as well, very honest and straight forward
5/5 girl!
gabriella

I think this is the type of poem that people everywhere should read because it's one people seriously need to think about! 5/5

This poem is beautiful, it is well written. I especially loved the way in which it flows and you know what? most of your readers will love this poem because its contents is indeed true. So keep up the good work.
"Being someone we never were,
Always bringing up situations in the past.
"5/5 great Job