WOW! This was a really excellent poem! Very original! And the flow of this amazing poem was nicely done! You picked a great topic to write such a great poem! 5/5

Aww, this poem is really sad and it's filled with lots of emotion. I really like it a lot. The flow of it was great! You really have a way with words. Keep on writing! 5/5

~Kristina

This poem really gets the reader into the excitement of the game...makes me want to play.keep it up:)