You took away my pride by stageing my own suicide

by Brie Anna   Jul 12, 2007


You made me self degrade myself
you took away my pride
I beged and screamed and cried for help
So why did they all say suicide

You held my hands in your one hand
You called me your little sugger pie
I had to listen to your every comand
I felt worthless and started to cry

My tears brought you joy
You started to unbutton my shirt
I was just your play toy
And Felt equivalent to a pile of dirt

I was weak and you were strong
You enjoyed watching my pain
You made me feel like i didn't belong
I think I'm going insain

Your finily finished with me and your wheezing
As i just lay there on the floor
What you did to me wasn't very pleasing
I felt like your little w h o r e

You made me self degrade myself,
you took away my pride
I beged and screamed and cried for help
So why did they all say suicide

© Brie Anna Cherry Jello Press ©

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  • 17 years ago

    by Melissa

    Sad. But I really like it.

  • 17 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    Wow this is amazing um... really deep!

  • 17 years ago

    by purplified

    A truly sad poem...straight to the point and great to read yet tear provoking in its honesty of the situation 5/5 - though you might want to fix insain as it's spelt insane - not trying to be fussy just letting you know =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Broke&Lost

    I loved it. 10/10 (In my book of course that's possible) Great job. I love it when people create something so sincere and heartfelt...and I enjoy reading it. So keep writing because you are very talented.