Comments : You took away my pride by stageing my own suicide

  • 17 years ago

    by Broke&Lost

    I loved it. 10/10 (In my book of course that's possible) Great job. I love it when people create something so sincere and heartfelt...and I enjoy reading it. So keep writing because you are very talented.

  • 17 years ago

    by purplified

    A truly sad poem...straight to the point and great to read yet tear provoking in its honesty of the situation 5/5 - though you might want to fix insain as it's spelt insane - not trying to be fussy just letting you know =)

  • 17 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    Wow this is amazing um... really deep!

  • 17 years ago

    by Melissa

    Sad. But I really like it.