by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex Jul 12, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
This is in the sad category because it's about death, and I didn't know where else to put it. =] |
Wow! what a great oem, alothough its rather depressing, you penned it beautifully. i love th words that you have chosen to use. Its rather unique i beleive deffinatly deseves a 5/5. very inspiaring! |
by Fsams
Thw whole poem is very cohesive and it is just in the right category. You have nicely written it and your poems are really unique in rhythm i=and structure. Max ratings dear |
I thought this was amazing! The whole flow was great and the line "We've got more patience then a suicidal and we've got more time then God. "...made me smile *shrugs* I dont know why but it kept my attention...I liked that you used it to end the peom as well. 5/5 |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
I forgot about this. |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
Oohh. i love your wording. |