"I'll alway remember you" << Always.

It made me cry. Well, almost at least. I had tears about to come out. It's so sad. Amazingly written. I absolutely love it.
My favorite so far. :]

I'll give it a 5/5
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Crazygonuts.

here <<hear

and awwwww. that got me. that was a change from the other poems of yours i read. great job. 5/5.

Daddy, you don't need to worry on this cold winter night,
God's got me by his side, and there's no need to fret, Mommy's up here too;
We're watching over you; don't be frightened, it'll be okay,
And Daddy know, I'll always remember you."

This stock of stanzas really captivated my attention. The mono rhymes are really having a positive impression. I like the wordings and the flow. Well penned and well written. TC