by Birgit
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW |
by lisa
Wow so beautiful hun.i loved it!!!great use of words to.this was an amazing piece x |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
Awwwwww. i almost teared in this poem. Great job. Being that it's a 15 minute poem I can't say what you should change. It's cliche, but that's the only thing I can think of that you could change, but thats the whole point! |
Omg..wonderful poem thi s is...just brilliant:D |
by BlueDreams
Beautiful free verse you penned here, you express them within beautiful emotions written, just simply but beautiful done! "Do not dismiss your dreams. To be without dreams is to be without hope. To be without hope is to be without purpose. Do not run through life so fast that you forget not only where you have been, but also where you are going. Life is not a race, but a journey to be savored each step of the way. "Remember that silence is sometimes the best answer." |
I really enjoyed this poem I thought it was very well written, the word choice and the flow were very sweet and heartfelt. You really did a fantastic job with this poem, Excellent work 5/5 GG23 |
by firexdancer
This was really sweet, so heartfelt and touching and it made me smile. it really is a beautiful poem, and it has little details that make it that way. 5/5 |
by Goran Rahim
Wow sir, |
This poem is so cute! Well done!! :-) You can tell it comes from the heart and is very meaningful to you... which is the best kind of poetry as far as i'm concerned... it's just beautiful! Keep writing I look forward to reading more of your work! |
15 minute but it was wonderful. Such passion and breathtakeing words to say to the one perosn that you love. You could really feel the love and the emotions in this poem. Well done. God Bless 5/5 |
by ForeverYoung
Wow! |
by LuvLyLynn
WOW!!! this blew me up... ^_^ it was sweet, cute, and very well written... I usually like rhyming but this one I enjoyed reading very much...I like the flow and the emotion it had... this is a masterpiece lol...keep up the good work and i look forward to reading more of your work... ^_^ I love the ending |
by Jenni Marie
OH |
by X2892
This was great.. no excellent love poem i loved how u used the words in this poem, now this is true love, 5/5 |
by Mihaela
This is the poem I like the most and please don't stop writing them!!! Any boy can make a girl feel special by reading this poem....Keep on the good work and take good care of u!!*Hugs*Hugs*Hugs* |
by Mihaela
This was the idea of the comment...To make u smile :) |
by Gasttlee
Nice one! 5/5 |
by Crystal Gaze
The Imagery was amzing. It put me in tear's. |
This is so beautiful i really just love this poem to death...it is just one of those peoms that make you think..like this line>>>"I whispered, "Your eyes are the window to your heart.. |
by Kayla
Marc this was an amazingly beautiful poem. Not only was your poem wonderful, but so is the title... that is definitely what caught my eye and I just had to read this! It does not surprise me at all that you have gotten so many comments on this and rates, it's a fantastic poem! It was so full of love and you really expressed the characters feelings in this. Great job dear, please keep up the awesome work!! I hope to read more beautiful creations from you. 5/5 <3 <3 <3 |