Hey Miss Fire,

This was quite an endearing piece of work; in fact, I find it quite adorable to read. However, I supposed certain lines needs tightening up, in order to augment the rhythm, as well as adding more coherent details. It, nevertheless, is still a fine and promising work.

Best wishes,
Marian

I like this a lot, I like how you describe your trust and love in people, how you don't just 'give your heart away', and how you portray the person who you love.

Nice and meaningful.

5/5 well done :)